This snippet is from one of my current WIPs (so totally raw and unedited) – a holiday story called Play Nice. I thought I’d write it now while immersed in the Christmas spirit. It’s a bit over 6 lines but who’s counting? ๐
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โIโm surprised to see you.โ Aaron held out his hand as he approached and Hunter automatically responded passing his bag to his left hand so he could grasp Aaronโs hand in a firm handshake. โI didnโt expect youโd be coming. Your grandparents will be happy.โ
Hunter ignored the thrill of Aaronโs warm and strong grip, and didnโt dare consider dwelling on the feelings just seeing the man instilled. Instead he focused on the revolting sensation of his wet, clinging jeans and his quickly numbing legs. He released Aaronโs hand and hauled his suit bag higher. โAnd why the hell not. You think Iโd miss the big party?โ
Aaron had the decency to look embarrassed. โErโฆ you havenโt been around for a while so I thoughtโโ
โYou donโt know anything about me,โ Hunter snapped. โNot anymore. So donโt presume.โ
Aaron raised his hands, palms up and taking a step back. โHey, I didnโt mean anything by it. Anyway, Iโm sorry about the water. I didnโt realise the puddle was so deep and that you were standing so closeโโ
โSo now youโre blaming me?โ Hunterโs voice rose. He knew he was being unreasonable but he couldnโt hold back where Aaron was concerned. โIโm standing on the sidewalk, exactly where pedestrians are supposed to stand. Itโs not my fault that you werenโt paying attention.โ
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Have a great weekend and happy reading!
Nic xx
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AM says
Ooh, looks like some sparks are flying there.
Addison Albright says
Not getting off on the right foot, are they? Should be fun seeing them come together! ๐
rhodrymavelyne says
Heh, adversity is a great starting point for a plot and a relationship. (heart)
Charli Coty says
Nice tension! I’m sure it’ll be extra-sweet when they move past it. <3
Antonia Aquilante says
Great tension!